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joefrankbaraba
joefrankbaraba
" VERY GOOD "
Feb 3 2007, 12:55 AM EST | Post edited: Feb 3 2007, 12:55 AM EST
2/3/2007
Steven:
That was very good, I couldn't even have
done that ...Keep up the good work, we want to hear more from you........

Cheers...Joe
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smsarber
1. I"m Glad You Liked It
Feb 3 2007, 10:23 PM EST | Post edited: Feb 3 2007, 10:23 PM EST
Nothing turns a rotten day around faster than a compliment. Thanks Joe!
S.M.S.
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joefrankbaraba
joefrankbaraba
2. RE: I"m Glad You Liked It
Feb 4 2007, 12:00 AM EST | Post edited: Feb 4 2007, 12:00 AM EST
2/4/2007
I have a question, I locked myself out of my computer as administrator. I went back to systems restore to dec. 2006, to check something and now I can't get to my files, I have Dell xp 2000 , I don't know how to get back in and correct this mess ? Do you know ? Thanks.
Cheers..Joe
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smsarber
3. RE: I"m Glad You Liked It
Feb 4 2007, 12:16 AM EST | Post edited: Feb 4 2007, 12:16 AM EST
Unfortunately I know little about computers. I play around till I figure things out, but we have a Gateway, check your recycle bin, who knows.
S.M.S.
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joefrankbaraba
joefrankbaraba
4. RE: Hi
Feb 6 2007, 12:35 AM EST | Post edited: Feb 6 2007, 12:35 AM EST
2/6/2007
Steve:
I checked out your web page , very good. Your poetry is from the heart and
it touches the heart and soul...Very good.

Cheers.......Joe
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pegesus
pegesus
5. RE: " VERY GOOD "
Feb 6 2007, 1:10 AM EST | Post edited: Feb 6 2007, 1:10 AM EST
this is an exceptional beginning, i dont think i'd like to be alone with at man. the story byline keeps one on their toes wanting to know what happens next
loved it
mary etta
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LizzieTish
6. Byline
Feb 6 2007, 8:43 AM EST | Post edited: Feb 6 2007, 8:43 AM EST
Hi Pegasus!
Just a note: a byline is the name of the person who wrote the story, using either his/her real name or pseudonym. I think you meant that his storyline keeps one on their toes!
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smsarber
7. Just Wanted You to Know
Feb 6 2007, 4:14 PM EST | Post edited: Feb 6 2007, 4:14 PM EST
I also have a poem on this site, Letter From the Heart. Check it out. It was written during the beginning of my road to sobriety.

Thank You For All The Great Comments!
Steven Michael Sarber
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joefrankbaraba
joefrankbaraba
8. RE: hI
Feb 6 2007, 7:49 PM EST | Post edited: Feb 6 2007, 7:49 PM EST
2/7/2007
Steven:
I've read your poem , it's beautiful and from the heart. Congratulations
on your sobriety , many good things will come your way.

Cheers.....Joe
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pegesus
pegesus
9. RE: " VERY GOOD "
Feb 7 2007, 12:22 AM EST | Post edited: Feb 7 2007, 12:22 AM EST
"this is an exceptional beginning, i dont think i'd like to be alone with at man. the storyline keeps one on their toes wanting to know what happens next
loved it how long till its released??
mary etta"
sorry about the mistake
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smsarber
10. To Mary Etta
Feb 8 2007, 12:55 AM EST | Post edited: Feb 8 2007, 12:55 AM EST
Your post about my "Garrote" story made me very happy. I mean, that is my goal: to keep you on you toes. Actually, "Garrote" was written as a 'cliffhanger".A short story to juice up your adreneline, and leave you wanting more. I am currently 12,000 words into a novel, and when I finish that I will begin work on creating a full length novel of "Garrote".
S.M.S.
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